|AUTHOR: Ava Jae|
SERIES: Beyond the Red, book 1
PUBLISHER: Sky Pony Press
PUBLICATION DATE: March 1, 2016
GENRE: Science fiction, aliens
SETTING: distant desert planet far into future
GIVE IT TO: HS
REVIEW: Beyond the Red begins with so much potential. I loved the otherworldly setting, and half-blood Eros reminded me a little of Nathan in Half Bad. The action began quickly with a kidnapping at gunpoint, a massacre, and enslavement occurring within just the first few chapters. The scene where Eros and the others are turned into slaves was especially heart-breaking and unique.
I did finish this book, but that is largely because the beginning was so good. I kept thinking the story would surely find its feet again. By the time I decided it wasn't going to happen, I figured I might as well finish.
WHAT I DIDN'T LIKE:
- My main girl Kora. Am I supposed to feel sorry for her? She is not a good queen, and she needs to be overthrown. I'll admit that her character does show some growth, but really, girl. You are flirting with a boy whose family your people massacred and enslaved. Granted, you did not condone this, but you didn't do a whole lot of speaking up against it, either. Are you the queen or what? How different would this story have been if Kora were a ruthless, kick-ass queen instead of a sniveling, flirtatious weakling?
- Nanites. Everything impossible on earth is suddenly possible with the ever-ubiquitous nanites. Need to change your eye color to hide your identity? Nanites! Need to track down someone and kill them? Nanites! Need to tame a ferocious beast? You got it--get some nanites! I wonder, if nanites can do so much, why are slaves even necessary? Surely, they can be "programmed" to do something as simple as cooking and ironing...
- The chest-lust. And nipple-lust. Leg-lust. Ripped abs-lust. Floating bed lust. More breast-lust. Muscle-lust. It's just too much and significantly detracts from the story. And seriously, Kora sleeps naked with a similarly-aged, half-naked, hunky male stranger in her room (and quickly, in her bed)? She fights without underwear on? Classy.
- Eros appreciates Kora's sexy bod, even knowing her people just slaughtered his whole family and enslaved the few survivors? She may not have ordered the massacre, but she is the queen. Did she punish anyone for their involvement? Did she willingly let the captured slaves go? I can't imagine that Eros could, just a short time later, comfort her from nightmares or think about sex with her. I would think he'd be too busy plotting to kill her.
- Insta-love and a love triangle that also has insta-love? KMN.
THE BOTTOM LINE: A disappointment. It joins Nil and Defy as another disappointing Two-Face.
STATUS IN MY LIBRARY: I do not plan to order it.
READALIKES: Read Legend (Lu) or Half Bad (Green) instead.
- Overall: 2/5--it's not all terrible, and I did finish it
- Creativity: 2/5
- Characters: 2/5--die Kora!
- Engrossing: 3/5
- Writing: 2/5
- Appeal to teens: 3/5
- Appropriate length to tell the story: 3/5
- Language: moderate--some F-bombs "fucken"
- Sexuality: high--plenty of male and female body lust; frequent nakedness or semi-nakedness; male homosexual relationships (including two men caught in bed together); multiple references to erection; kissing; 2nd base is reached
- Violence: high; bloody massacre of innocent men, women, and children; torture (sleep deprivation, extreme temperatures); a man's ear is bitten off
- Drugs/Alcohol: mild; wine; nanites are used for control and torture